English h.w

I believe that courage is doing something even though you are afraid off it. I was really afraid the day I had to sail out into the ocean a tiny boat called an Optimist. My friend’s dad had just told me about a diving trip in the same area, where he had sighted a shark the weekend before. My test at sail training was to turn the boat over, turn the boat head to wind and swim to the centerboard and pull the boat upright. Then climb back into the boat. When I hit the water I felt cold, anxious and I was wondering what was beneath me. My heart was beating fast and I took all my physical strength to get the boat up again.  Once back on the boat I felt exhausted,happy and relieved at the same time. It felt great to challenge myself.

The rats of Nimh is a story about a family of field mice who have big problems. One of the children is ill and the mice have to ask the rats that they don’t trust for help. From the first paragraph it is  interesting and very exiting. The first paragraph is very captivating in the way the author describes their house.  This book is mainly about overcoming adversity, heroisim, loyalty and trust.

Word choice and voice

In class today we learnt about voice and word choice.

Voice means  a writers style, his  personality. It is everything in life that makes a writer unique, personality, opinion and thoughts, personal feelings, humor, ideas.

Word choice is about finding the precise words, words with impact. Words that add feeling to a book, and words that a author would use to add excitement and interest. Using sensory language like what you see, smell, hear or taste is one example for word choice.

Six Traits: Ideas

Today in class we learnt about one of the six writing traits: ideas. For my article I chose the Vendee Globe, a non stop single handed sailing race around the world. We had to write ten interesting ideas about our subject, to narrow it down. My ideas were:

  1. How it began
  2. Living conditions
  3. Route
  4. Boat design
  5. Boat accidents
  6. Record speeds
  7. Weather conditions
  8. Endurance
  9. Helping others
  10. Boat overturned

Then we sorted the ten ideas in to three larger groups;

  • History of the race (1)
  • Disasters and rescues (5, 8, 9, 10)
  • About the race (2, 3, 4, 6, 7).

This helps to structure my article more than just working with ideas. I will write about the race and disasters and rescues.


The Egypt Game

Develop and adapt active reading skills and strategies

1)

The main strategy I used throughout the book was prediction. I tried to predict for example what was going to happen to April when she was getting attacked by the murderer. I thought that April was going to get away unharmed because the story would have been less interesting without her. The only person with April was Marshall, so I new Marshall would do something to help April. It made me understand that little Marshall grow out of being a little child because he had to be really brave to help April.

 

In class we used prediction when the teacher asked us what would happen in the next chapter. Reading about different characters in a book is like getting to know them well enough to have an idea about what they are going do next.

 

The longer I read the book the easier it became for me to use prediction, because I under- stood the characters better and better. The adjustment I made to my strategy was to use other reading skills, like asking myself questions about the characters.

 

In the next book that we read I would like to use more visualization because I would like to draw more pictures in my mind.

 

Understand and respond to ideas, viewpoints, themes and purposes in texts

2)

For my character viewpoint I choose to write about April, as she is the person most impacted by the events of the story.

 

April was send by her mother to stay with her grandmother. When April arrived she wasn’t very friendly to her grandmother. When her grandma asked April to call her grandma she said that she would call her by her first name. It shows that April wanted to keep her distance from her grand mother. She also went to a fashion shop before her grandmother would find out that her mum gave her money, which shows that she did not trust her grandma. When she first met Melanie she did not even say hello and acted impolite. She tried to impress Melanie by telling her that her mum was a famous singer and actress and she acted like a Hollywood star herself.

 

April started to become more open and friendly after playing with Melanie. She is very happy to play with someone instead of being alone or with adults. When she lived with her mum she never had anybody to play with, she lived only with adults. April opens to  Melanie, because she says nice things to April, makes her feel good, and they share an interest in Egypt and like to make up stories and play them. Melanie understands that April is not arrogant but lonely. Slowly April stops putting on her Hollywood act. With friends like Melanie and her grandmother always there for her she starts calling her grandma “granny” and starts talking and sharing her feelings with her. In the end when her mum invites her to come and meet her in a letter, April writes a letter back saying that she would prefer to stay with granny and shows it to her grandma. It shows that April has come to love her grandmother and trusts her more that her mother.

 

Assessment Part 3:

Analyze how writers’ use of linguistic and literary features shapes and influences meaning.

 

Simile:

Smoke curled upwards like a dancing snake (p 150)  To me it means that the smoke looks like it is alive because it is being compared to a dancing snake. A snake is also a symbol of danger.

 

 bird

 

 

Personification:

The flashlight beam made trash bins crouch and garbage pails lurks. (p181)To me it means that the author wants to create a picture of danger or fear. Crouching can mean trying to hide away, so the trash bins appear to be scared. The garbage pails lurked means that they were lying hidden ready to attack. This both means that something bad is going to happen.

wall

 crouch

 

 

Metaphor: The rain was coming down in a great wet roar (160) To me a roar means the sound similar to a giant wave crashing down. It means that there is lots of rain coming down noisily.

 

 

 lion

 

 

The similes, metaphors and the personifications where really enjoyable and made the book more exiting for me.

 

  1. Essential Questions

 

4.1) The elements that build a strong friendship are shared interests, spending time together and caring for each other.

 

We can see this in the book when April and Melanie work together to begin the game in the professor’s backyard. The Egypt game would not have begun if April and Melanie had not had the same interests. They shared an interest in ancient history, especially in Egyptian history.

 

Another element that builds strong friendship is seeing each other frequently and spending time together. April and Melanie developed a strong friendship because they saw each other at home, at school and they played a lot together.

 

Caring for each other and respecting the other person is also very important. For example when April was going to go to school on her first day wearing the fake eye lashes, Melanie did not want to hurt April’s feelings by telling her directly to her face that she looked ridicules with them. So she hid the eyelashes without April even noticing and put them back after a week of school. It shows that Melanie really cares about April, who would have made a fool of herself.

 

 

4.2) The impact that family has during different stages of our life changes. During the baby years you get taught the basic skills like walking, talking and eating. But the most important thing to a toddler is to feel loved and secure. The only reason that toddlers explore their environment is because they feel safe.

 

When you grow up your family helps you to become more independent and teaches you how to interact with others, like being friendly and polite to other people. More important is that they love and encourage you so you feel good about yourself. April misses her mother, but her mother does not miss her much and puts her with her grandmother. April does not like her grandmother at first, maybe because she was not asked if she wanted to stay with her grandma. But in the end she feels loved and protected by her and starts to love her back.

 

 

Global Warming

Today I was following the news on the Copenhagen summit and the people most concerned about climate change were the people who lived on small island states. In the more developed countries like China and the U.S.A. people were less concerned. It seems that only the people who are already  affected  [for instance by stronger hurricanes taking land from the islands] are the only ones who seriously  want to stop global warming. Here is a photo that I took in Paris of Greenpeace protesting against climate change. They wanted to raise awareness about global warming, especially to holiday makers who have a big carbon footprint as they usually travel by plane or car.

Greenpeace

goegraphy

Today we were talking about climate change and we were asked to write a letter to a world leader about climate change. Here it is:

Dear Prime Minister Kevin Rudd,

I am worried about climate change, especially about fresh and clean drinking water, drought, green house gas emissions and rising water levels.

All of these problems could be fixed if you would ban combustion engines, build solar powered cars or imported them, and make them cheaper. My biggest concern is rising water levels which can only be fixed if we reduce the amount of carbon dioxide emissions.

Some possible solutions are to build solar powered buses and more trains, build properly insulated houses and apartments, plant more trees and stop cutting remaining rainforests down. It would also be good to add filters to car and factory exhausts pipes.

Another solution would be for all of us to consume less.

Kind regards,

Vasco

English

Once for Halloween I dressed up as Al Capone from the Italian mafia.  I was wearing a black hat that had a small upsweep on the back, with it I wore a big black cape that was old, heavy and dusty which added to the evil look. I was also carrying a massive water gun, which was bright orange with a dull yellow. The cape was a present from my best friend for my 10th birthday when I still lived in Australia. I decided to dress up as Al Capone because the week before Halloween I was at a sleep over at my friends house and we were watching a movie about the Italian mafia which inspired my dress up as Al Capone. The day on Halloween I went with my three friends who were dressed up as a zombie, Dracula and as a storm trooper from Star Wars. Once home from trick or treating my friends and I ate dinner and some of our sweets while we were watching a movie. We were so tired we all fell asleep on the hard wooden floor

English home work

Today in English we were talking about how we would feel if we were one of the characters in the Egypt Game, who had to stay inside when somebody was murdered in the neighbourhood.

I would have felt frustrated and unhappy about having to stay inside all day. It would have broken the routine of playing the exciting Egypt Game. Playing the game inside is less exiting, because the athmosphere is too familiar, it does not come alive as much.  I would think about all the neighbours and try to find out who could have been the murderer. I would ask my friends over and discuss the murder  of the little girl with them. I would work on my Egypt costume wondering when we would be allowed out again and if we would feel save in “Egypt” after what happened.

My toy cat

Today in class we were talking about Marshall and his toy octopus, Security.  I had a cat toy called Ling when I was five. I got Ling when I was living in Taiwan in a departement store called Shinkong Mitsukoshi. When I got out of the department store it was raining heavily due to a typhoon approaching the island.

I got Ling because we had just come from Holland, I was missing my friends and family and my mum decided to cheer me up by buying a toy for me.

Ling is a beige-brown colored, has a terry-cloth skin, and makes a great bolster pillow. I used to really like it when I was little. The cat is on almost every photo of me in Taiwan. Even on flights I had it in my own back pack.

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